The idea of Saraya having to return to Dacwen and get rescued (hopefully!) for once by the humans was another organic idea that formed when writing another scene.
As this evolves though I’d like to highlight the mess on Dacwen right now, and the pending civil conflict. I’d like it move in the opposite direction that the conflict on Heven did meaning, (hopefully!) Dacwenites will find a more evolved way to get their planet back to a state of balance.
In the meantime, I hope you’re all hating on Savil.
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