Tell Her She Has to Leave…

I’m really very mean to my MC. This scene is also a major plot point spoiler. I mean sharing the rough draft of the book while I’m writing it is, but if you’re trying to avoid major plot points, well, this is one of them.

In this scene  I get to dive into what the prison system looks like on Dacwen, which I’m excited about as part of my world building. Even when you break the law I want Dacwen to be a beacon of there is a better way to treat people. And then of course, everything goes to hell. The full prison break part of this hasn’t been written yet, but I’ve got a lot of ideas floating around in my brain. Enjoy!

The Day Her Sister Died

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